That bend in the river, there, There probably isn’t all that much to see, -More river, more bend and another damned tree- Such fun round the bend, on our own, it would be; That bend in the river, there.
How finely this flows, and how prettily it sneaks from sounding like the beginning of a British Children's Poem ca 1800-something, into vexation, to possible romance, and then contemplation.
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This is infectious and makes me want to say 'let's do!'
You've talked me into it - I'll be happy to go round the bend with you.
Brilliant! I loved it!
ah it would be great just to explore...around the bend...smiles....lets go
How finely this flows, and how prettily it sneaks from sounding like the beginning of a British Children's Poem ca 1800-something, into vexation, to possible romance, and then contemplation.
Meet you all round the bend. Thanks so much. You say the nicest things. Helen, Patsy, Frances, Brian, kathy. You make me feel so good about myself
Lets do.....love this Rosamund!
Ahh, yes. There's always the lure of the unexpected round the next bend.
Thanks, Carrie. Meet you on the bank on Sunday. Ah, yes, Doctor ftse; the lure of the unexpected is the root of all excitement.
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